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Surenos 13 Deserves to get Official?
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PostSubject: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Wed Apr 07, 2010 10:46 pm












-My Child Hood-

Abelino Maximiliano was Mexican Boy lived with his Mother and Father. He grew up in Los Angeles while his mother and father taken him there when he was 6 years old and leave there country "Maxico". And one day his mother and his father died while passing a street in Los Angele because there was a gang war and they was shooted by wrong and leave him when he was just 14 years old. He just grew up alone, He got his first gun at the age of 15, and started working for a guy named of “Deliver”. Deliver was one of the Top OG’s of 10th street. He was sitting on his ass the whole time I’ve seen him, he was a real fatty. He didn’t even get up to get his own drink, he had his people that wanted to be in the set do it for him. People relied on Deliver and, to get his money and drugs.

-Grew Up-

Deliver was a real hard cocaine addict, and made sure everyone would get him his drugs. One day Deliver called me into his “house” and told his gangster to start beating me up. I got beat up for five minutes, then got thrown a blue bandana and was told “welcome to the Fam” and they all greeted me as their family. I sold Deliver’s drugs, was one of the top dealers, and I was his favorite bringing in most of Deliver’s money. I sold all over Los Angeles city, and people knew me well, as “D”. One night I was selling the weed I was assigned too and I went to a park to sell it. It was about 1 am in the morning. I was sitting a bench waiting for people to walk past and stop to buy it. A man with a huge jacket came and asked me for 30 grams of weed. I nodded twice and waited for him to hand me the money. He handed me the money, and I gave him his weed, then I heard sirens, and I looked to my right and I spot a SWAT truck coming against me. I look up and I saw a Police helicopter. I just started running to my left without even looking if someone was there. I just turned my head straight while I was running, and I see a whole block of patrol officers aiming their weapons at me. I gave up. I put my hands up and two SWAT officers came and handcuffed.

-In The Prison-

I was sentenced 6 years in prison. It was the hardest 6 Years I have ever Seen I just meet a lot of Mexican Guys in the Prison and each one of us start talking About his life we found that all of us have the same sense and we Became all one family and we made a deal that we must all wait each other when we are out. When I got out I was 25 years old, and most of my gangsters had died or went to prison, so the 10th street were no longer in existence, and all The Mexican guys was still in prison so i decided to see my life till they come out of prison.

-Out Of Prison-

I had nothing to do with my life after I’ve seen my family gone and the Other Family Still in the Prison. I went to work at a drug store as a cashier and worked till I had enough money to go anywhere in the world I’d like. II was searching online at my work and looked at this place that said “Los Santos” I Waited My Family to be released One by One until all of them are out, I told them about this City that Called Los Santos and they All Agreed to go there, I ordered my ticket and ordered to them too to the next day. When I got home from working I told my boss that I was quitting and he gave me my last check which was 500 dollars. I went to sleep and when the alarm clock went off the next morning I packed my things and went as fast as I could to the airport me and my Amigos. We got at the airport and our plane was about to leave, We ran as fast as we could to the plane and got on. When I entered that plane it was going to change my life completely in many ways. We arrived at Los Santos and hell broke loose.

-In Los Santos-

When Abelino made it to Los Santos it changed his life.. He experienced a whole new life. He grabbed his Phone from his pocket and called the number for “LS-Taxi” which was labeled on the bus stop. And called for 2 taxis. When the taxis came to them they had no idea where to go. They just said bring them anywhere and the Taxi driver brought Abelino and his Family to the Mall. When I got there I wanted to kill myself, it was the most ridiculous place I’ve ever been the people there are just idiots. I walked around looking for a Motel and I happen to make it to The Jefferson Motel. I and My Family stayed there for about one week it was not that bad, tons of drugs going on in that place I could smell weed from a mile away. But I decided to go buy myself some weed and started rolling myself a blunt inside of the place too, it was the most amazing blunt I’ve ever had.. Was fresh and I haven’t had one in 16 years. I decided to just start exploring and look around the area. Till I went to commerce dealership and got myself a Burrito. It was not a bad car, but it would do to get me around Los Santos.

-In Grove Street-

And While I was driving I spotted a place.. It was like home to me. I wanted to find a place to stay there and I did. I was renting a room. It was called Grove Street. Was in love with the place and stayed there for the rest of the time he was at Los Santos and called all his Family to Come on Grove Street. He looked around at the random’s and started thinking about his life back at Los Angeles. He thought about making himself big , and starting some work to getting himself and his Family money. And he started to roll in the Street to get some Drugs to start working with it , and while he was rolling he found a man standing and looking around he went to him and started talking and from the talking he knew that his name is Biddy Jackson and he was living beside him in Grove street and he was Drug Dealer too , So he started working with him he and his Family But he was leading them in a lot of things and they became Friends and Biddy Became From his Family and they do alot of work with each other and made alot of money from selling Drugs and Arms and robbing some people and they just robbed Mullholand Bank but after all of this soemthing in the dreams happened, One day they was seating in Biddy’s House Collecting his things , after a very hard day as they was having fight in the morning with another gang that was Coming with About 15 men and was going to rule the Grove Street But they Started Shooting At them And Biddy and onther 12 men was shooted and they Died in the war , When the fight go over the Police Came and All of them Ran , So they said that They must Have a Trained Gang Not to lose There Hood and to take their revenge from this faggots who kills Biddy and the ohter 12 men So they Gathered all their Amigos and Started Training and They made it and named it "Surenos" and they put number "13" Because they lose 13 member in this war and they just knew that this Guys that was Going to Rule Grove Street was guys from Nutty Blocc Compton Crips Because they was Wearing their Blue Clothes and now all the Mexicans are Trained and Ready to Go to them...and Abelino Called Elm Street Piru Bloods Leader"Wakka" to be with each other on the Nutty Blocc Campton Crips


((The story ll be updated when the server is up..))











'Tu ll Find all the Capitáns and Soldados Standing in there hood So be Wise and don’t Come there Because if you came , it ll be the last Day in your Life , And you can also take a permission and come here do some bussnies







"Our Warehouse"
This is our Warehouse that 'Tu ll find all the gang here if there is a meeting or making a big Drug deal or Arm deal or any shit













El Jefe

(Skin ID:116)


Con El Jefe

(Skin ID:115)


Consejero

(Skin ID:114)


Capitán and Soldado

(Skin ID:174)

(Skin ID:175)

(Skin ID:173)








Our Color



'Tu ll find all of "Surenos 13" members wearing this rags on any place on their body maybe their head, hands Even on their Pants..










El Jefe(Rank 5)
Abelino Maximiliano(Active)

Con El Jefe(Rank 4)
Adelmo Ramiro(Not Yet)

Consejero(Rank 3)
Roberto Marcial(Active)
Acilino Marcial(Active)

Capitán(Rank 2)
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'


Soldado(Rank 1)
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'



El Jefe; He' is the One running all the gang
Con El Jefe; He' is the Right hand of El Jefe he is Leading in Some Situations
Consejero; He' is the one that train the Capitáns and Soldados to be Perfect..
Capitán; He' is the One that is new in the gang but he had Much experience than Soldado
Soldado; He' is the One that is New in the Gang and he is Responsible for Protecting the Hood










Elm Street Piru Bloods



Not Yet



Nutty Blocc Campton Crips








(Our cars color is Bright Blue: ID 93)

Two Blades(ID 536); Rank 1


Two PCJ-600(ID 461); Rank 2,3


Two Tahomas(ID 566); Rank 4,5










-OOC Rules-
1.You must follow the server rules
2.You must RP Everything, Either or you ll be Kicked
3.If you are leaving the Gang OR Kicked you ll be Cked (Character kill)
4.You must Listen to all Admins, and Obey what they are saying
5.You Must install Team Speak 3 , and have a mic
6.Your name must be Mexican name



-IC Rules-
1.Obey the Orders of the Higher Ranks
2.Dont talk to any Gang leader or make a war or peace or any shit with them without Order from El Jefe
3.'Tu must always to be in your Hood
4.'Tu must be Wearing your clothes
5.'Tu can’t walk in the town with any Ak or Mp5 you are Allowed only to walk with any Pistol
6.Never roll alone in the street, must roll in groups atleast 2 of you'r Amigos
7.And our rule is that; 'TWe respect the one who respect Us


Any One ll Break this Rules ll be Beated Up on his ass and warned two times Then Kicked from the Gang..








((Nothing Called Application Just Take a Permission and Come to Our Hood and 'Tu ll be Tested there and if you are Able you ll be in Our Gang))







The Plan

El Jefe
Abelino Maximiliano

Con El Jefe
Adelmo Ramiro


(The Arm Dealers:"AD")

Consejero
Acilino Marcial(The AD Leader)

Capitán
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'


Soldado
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'



(The Drugs Dealers:"DD")

Consejero
Roberto Marcial(The DD Leader)

Capitán
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'


Soldado
'Name' 'Name'
'Name' 'Name'








"The Official Signature"
>>http://img103.herosh.com/2010/04/21/510126112.jpg<<
This is for "Surenos 13" members Only







Commands

/Hire ; hire someone , Rank 5 Only
/Fire ; Fire someone , Rank 5 Only
/Demote ; To lower the rank of a member , Rank 5 Only
/Promote ; To high the rank of a member , Rank 5 Only
/Members ; To know who is online , From Rank 1
/Rank ; to the member to see his Own rank , From Rank 1
/F ; For Chat Between Members , Rank 1
/Fadvert ; Faction Advert , Rank 4,5


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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:24 am

Decoy the Mexican Mafia Done Hope you like it Guys and Please Delete the Onther Application of the B.G.F Thanks..


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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:27 am

Wait, are you deleting this one or the other?
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:28 am

The Other One the Black Gurilla Family Application..


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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 2:34 am

Make it street gang instead of Mafia. Something like Mara Salvatrucha 13, Latin Kings, Surenos, 18th Street...
no such thing as Mexican "Mafia" back in the 90's..

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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:17 pm

Name Changed , Story and Cars Updated
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:51 pm

Nice story and effort in doing this gang application. I am currently supporting this gang.

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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 8:48 pm

Nice story and very nice skins but try changing the cars but still /supporting
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:34 pm

It's exactly the same as the Black Guerilla Army application.. You still haven't added in anything like Diplomacy, Violation, Hood etc..
This isn't enough.
Anyway good luck...
You also need to change the Savanna because its being used by my gang already.

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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:40 pm

Man i cant Add a New Story , I made alot of Effort in this Story so i cant just Throw it and make a new One,,And BTW Topic Still under Construction
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:42 pm

Abelino Maximiliano wrote:
Man i cant Add a New Story , I made alot of Effort in this Story so i cant just Throw it and make a new One,,And BTW Topic Still under Construction

I didnt say anything about the story. Storys aren't the key that proves you can Roleplay. You must add all the little details in. It's the only way it's going to work out and for you to become official.

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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:45 pm

Look you wanna See my Rping just Test me how i Rp in Application..and i Still Adding more in the Application
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:52 pm

Read the Gang Application "- Also all will have to wait til the server is up so we can decide if the gang becomes offical or not. We do not know your roleplay and the Offical thing is based on your RP and how you lead your gang and how your gang does. If you are a retard and do not know how to lead a faction you will not become official."

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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:59 pm

I am Ready for the Test and Waiting the Server , but Damian i want to know your Opinion in the Application?
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:01 pm

Abelino Maximiliano wrote:
I am Ready for the Test and Waiting the Server , but Damian i want to know your Opinion in the Application?

You need to add more to your application also. How are we going to test you if the server isn't up. We don't test. We see..

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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:04 pm

Abelino Maximiliano wrote:
I am Ready for the Test and Waiting the Server , but Damian i want to know your Opinion in the Application?

It could always use more work. Its pretty good, but you know what we dont go by the application only we go by if you can RP or know how to read a faction so just wait and be patient and stop PMING us "IS THE APPLICATION GOOD ENOUGH" Just wait till the server is up and we will decide then allright fair enough?

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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:07 pm

Yea Fair but i Didnt Pm anyone Except Decoy Bec in the Other Application he Keep just saying Do Do Do and at the last he said you ll not Get Official because there Already two African American Gangs..This is all what Happened
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Fri Apr 09, 2010 2:35 pm

You can choose another symbol for this faction instead of this blue leaves(I mean better quality too)
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Sat Apr 10, 2010 5:04 pm

/Support.
Thats a great effort.
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Sat Apr 10, 2010 5:15 pm

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/Support.
Thats a great effort.
I agree its great effort, and he is good roleplayer but he is just having exams right now and he is studying (he is my friend) so wait for him in the summer and you will see much more effort from him.
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:01 pm

omar ahmed wrote:
JackGibson wrote:
/Support.
Thats a great effort.
I agree its great effort, and he is good roleplayer but he is just having exams right now and he is studying (he is my friend) so wait for him in the summer and you will see much more effort from him.
/SUPPORT
I Believe he will do good after all his exams, Good luck with your exams and im very sure you will do a better job after there all finished.

I also believe he can Role-Play well.
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:22 pm

Bradley_McFly wrote:
omar ahmed wrote:
JackGibson wrote:
/Support.
Thats a great effort.
I agree its great effort, and he is good roleplayer but he is just having exams right now and he is studying (he is my friend) so wait for him in the summer and you will see much more effort from him.
/SUPPORT
I Believe he will do good after all his exams, Good luck with your exams and im very sure you will do a better job after there all finished.

I also believe he can Role-Play well.

Thanks Guys..
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Sun Apr 18, 2010 9:53 pm

"Sorry for double post"
1.Design updated
2.The Plan almost added
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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:09 pm

After such an improvement in the design of the application and the addition of a nice plan for the gang, the application now looks better. Therefore the gang might be successful in the server.

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PostSubject: Re: Surenos 13 [UnOfficial]   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:10 pm

Leyon_Kevin wrote:
After such an improvement in the design of the application and the addition of a nice plan for the gang, the application now looks better. Now it looks good and therefore the gang might be successful in the server.

I just wanna say to you , Thanks Man Smile
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